Becky Palmer - Feedback 2nd Feburary.
-Try taking out all the words and seeing where the words are required.
-Shorten his return, re already know the journey home. Doesn’t need the space.
-Condense bit where the knights tell him about King Arthur.
-Hair cut. Take out some actions to fit on one page.
- Wealthy knight bit. Goes on.
- Are the words required for the musicians. Can they just be in the double page spread with the merrymakers
- Cut down the pages with the instruments.
- Add a half page at the end to tie things together.
- Start off by trying to get it down to 32 pages. If you can’t get it down to 40 pages.
- Make end pages.
- Really look at the relationship between images and text. How do other picture makers do it?